Michelle's+PSA

Here is the red letter version of my PSA

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Here is my version of the PSA- Michelle

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Michelle, Awesome job on the video! I really love the newspaper at the beginning. It looks real professional. Is it under a minute? Te only think I see that may need to b changed is the green font on the text. It is a lttle hard to read. Other than that...it looks great! - Christine

Michelle, Here is my critical notes. I like that your PSA moves pretty fast, meaning that the visuals move fast and keep the audience entertained. I also like the newspaper and faded video as an intro. If this were picked to be our PSA the only thing i would change is possibly cleaning up the audio on clips 2 and 3 by removing the background noise and trying to make the voices a little stronger. -Lucinda